A good story, but incomplete. I don't know if it was intentional, but I was definitely left with a desire to find out what happens next. This is short, only 22 pages, so perhaps the author wants you to purchase other books? I would have rated it at 4 stars, but the writing style was awkward. The short, choppy sentences were distracting. I also wanted more explanations. The author tends to hit you with Brad doing something and then two paragraphs later, come back to it to explain that thought or occurrence. It was very disruptive to the flow. Again, very choppy. The ideas were there, but not the style. Plus, the inconclusive ending.